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#1 searching



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Posted 23 October 2013 - 08:38 PM

It’s when there’s nowhere to go

The chains hold you tight

And a voice telling you

Give it up

It’ll forever be night

Forget the effort

You ain’t got hope

You’ve long ago reached

The end of your rope

Give it up man

You’ll never be free

Flying is for people

Unlike you and me

They tell the world

Of the sunshine in the rain

We tell them of darkness

Captivity and pain

Give it up I tell you

Flying free is for men

Who see stars

When no one else can see them

Climbing’s for people

Who now already stand tall

You ain’t got a chance

You’re bound to slip and fall

Locked up alright

Dream of your freedom one day

It’s a bottomless pit

The reality is to stay

You ain’t got no friends man

Don’t you see no one cares

Deal with the hurt

It’s still night out there

#2 luv2rebel



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Posted 28 October 2013 - 03:31 AM

Wow!!! Awesome poem!!!
Yes I sometimes feel exactly the same way...just give it up, ull never manage....
But don't worry!! One day ull look back and not only b ok with wat ur going thru, ull also see how it built u to become the strongest person ever!!
Good luck!

#3 Morgenstern



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Posted 28 October 2013 - 11:23 AM

"They tell the world

Of the sunshine in the rain"
Because if they werent Jewish, they would be mormons.