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A RIDE I LIKE TO CALL LIFE


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#1 ilavHashem

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Posted 25 December 2011 - 02:05 AM

not a poem, just a nice thought! tell me what you think! :)

A RIDE I LIKE TO CALL LIFE

you are the passenger in Hashem's ride called "LIFE"
you seem to think you call the shots.
you plan a route ,
tell Him where to stop or turn
you are the worst backseat driver

you do not control the car
He does.
only He knows the destination
you am merely along for the ride

"get as much done as you can"
they all tell you,
"you never know when the ride might end.
get to know your driver
He might let you stay on for longer"

smile at the passersby
but beware who you let in
they will influence the route you take
make sure its the way YOU want to go

gaze at the scenery
think about life
spend your car-ride wisely
its the only one you get

if you ever enter a tunnel
it seems dark,but never dispair
cry out to your driver
and your woes He will hear

soon, He will heed your cries,
the light at the end will appear
smile at its glow in the distance
how far it is you do not know

now you are out
your troubles all a memory
a figment of the past
a story to tell

never forget your inspiration
talk to you driver every moment you can
He will help you to see the way
to truly understand

ask Him to turn on the radio
but beware what you let it
all outer forces there to corrupt us
He will warn you, but allow any station

the driver is your Father,
you Friend, and Creater.
even when He is punishing you
He can't help but love you

smile at the good times and at the bad
no matter what, He's in charge
no need to worry,
our fears won't change the course

bumps in the road can be prevented
hishtadlus is the key.
when there's nothing more to be done,
call out to Him , its the best hishtadlus you can do!

its a ride
a joyful one
a short one
make it a full one!

love every moment you have with Him
and try not to "backseat drive" so much
He knows what He's doing!
after all, He is the DRIVER

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-ilavHashem

#2 randomhouse

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Posted 25 December 2011 - 03:11 PM

wow this is such a good mashal for life!!!!!!

#3 israelgirl67

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 08:34 PM

i lav hashem------ btw this is awesome.... such a great mashal :):):):) i learn with some ppl and we did ur article and everyone was shocked how someone can write like that ... kol hakavod

#4 ilavHashem

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 01:40 PM

thnxx soo much!!! ur stuff is WOAH btw! (i printed 1 of ur thngs n put in this binder where i keep tonzz of articles!)
u used this article?? im honered.... :)


#5 israelgirl67

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Posted 23 January 2012 - 09:38 PM

iluvhashem:) which one?? this article that u have deserves t be published

#6 ilavHashem

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Posted 24 January 2012 - 07:26 PM

the hishtadlus from a 3 yr old...n also the happiness one! both rok :) thnx!

#7 israelgirl67

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Posted 26 January 2012 - 09:50 PM

thats intresting :) most ppl like the storm :) but happieness is my fave :)

#8 ilavHashem

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Posted 31 January 2012 - 11:25 PM

tht ones amazing! write more!

#9 flybird

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Posted 06 February 2012 - 07:31 PM

wow!!! do u mind if i print it out 2 put it in a binder i have of articles? :D

#10 ilavHashem

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Posted 20 February 2012 - 02:49 AM

no prob....njoy